Is this a good start? can i get a little help , tips , anything for my descriptive writing in my english class?

From the hill that leads to the beach is the most spectacular spot to watch the sunwirse , awakening the world from a restless sleep. The trees are dancing ever so effortlessly in the distance , providing gorgeous fresh air. The preserved nature of the golden sand gently layers it self for as far as the naked eye can see! the ultimate relaxation state is here for the taking ! seagulls and birds are already hunting for food that is scarce , swooping down every so often to battle over a greasy tressure that is found near a chip shop. The content sun is now pumping out sizzling heatwaves upon the bronze sunseekers , asking for more as sun creame start to vanish into their skin like a water swallowing a rock. Aggressive waves gather strenght like an army of liquified men crashing and then retreating. Perfect for surfers , terrifying for the young children as they tip toe back to their parents through the fiery grains of sand.